Octopus love.

One day in a sunny day, in a shop there was an aquarium with a couple of octopus lovers, they were hugging each other, but suddenly someone appeared and took out one of the octopus. It was the female octopus. In that moment the male octopus started to imagine the end of his love story with the death of his love, dying in a kitchen and been cutting in many pieces for a knife, so he jumped out from the aquarium and went for his love, so he started to run back to the truck as fast as he can.

When he got to the truck he tried to rescue to his girlfriend, so he started to fight with the driver; while the two octopus fell from the truck, they started to run away from the driver, so they started to jump in some pools that houses had, when they thought that they were safe and looking to each other, a bird came and took this time the boyfriend octopus, so she jumped as high as she could to go after her octopus boyfriend, when she get the strong to jump she did it, and she hit on the head to the bird and the two octopus felt inside of the sea, they met again and live happy forever.


REFLECTION:
This is a text from a video that I watched in classes. I chose this video because it is about a couple octopus lovers and it was funny. It wasn't difficult start a draft because when you watched something on the TV you can hold it for more time in your mind and you just have to say what you saw. I had mistakes in punctuation but this time the mistakes were few in comparison of the first drafts.