Octopus love.

One day in a sunny day, in a shop there was an aquarium with a couple of octopus lovers, they were hugging each other, but suddenly someone appeared and took out one of the octopus. It was the female octopus. In that moment the male octopus started to imagine the end of his love story with the death of his love, dying in a kitchen and been cutting in many pieces for a knife, so he jumped out from the aquarium and went for his love, so he started to run back to the truck as fast as he can.

When he got to the truck he tried to rescue to his girlfriend, so he started to fight with the driver; while the two octopus fell from the truck, they started to run away from the driver, so they started to jump in some pools that houses had, when they thought that they were safe and looking to each other, a bird came and took this time the boyfriend octopus, so she jumped as high as she could to go after her octopus boyfriend, when she get the strong to jump she did it, and she hit on the head to the bird and the two octopus felt inside of the sea, they met again and live happy forever.


REFLECTION:
This is a text from a video that I watched in classes. I chose this video because it is about a couple octopus lovers and it was funny. It wasn't difficult start a draft because when you watched something on the TV you can hold it for more time in your mind and you just have to say what you saw. I had mistakes in punctuation but this time the mistakes were few in comparison of the first drafts.

Describing Person.

If you ask who am I, I would describe myself. My name is Analía I am a short person. I think that I am in one meter and fifty eight centimeters high. My body is average built. I have a square face with some freckles and a round, brown and tiny mole on the left side of my chin. I have long, curly and black hair. My hair looks like the shape of the D.N.A. My eyes are dark brown like the darks olives and long eyelashes.

I am a moody person. Sometimes I can be really happy in an excessive way or sometimes I can be really sad. I am a loyal person and for that reason I like that my friends be loyal too. I don't like that my friends change me for other people or for people that I don't like because I feel jealous. I can be sweet when I am in love or when I feel happy, but if I am sad or angry I can be the worst company, and I used to keep away of everybody. I am funny and I say some jokes to my friends when I feel good.

REFLECTION: In this draft my writing process was more easy, to the beginning I didn't knew how to describe to myself but classes of Miss Celia and help of my professor Chamorro and the instructions of how to do a describing paragraph helps me a lot. At the beginning I made some elementary mistakes about punctuation and grammar. I had to read again my text and fixed the things that I did wrong. Now I can describe something or to someone without many problems.

Summer.

 Telling an incident.


One day in a summer night I was walking on the beach with some friends. It was a beautiful night. It was clearly and the weather was very comfortable. All of us were enjoying a good time; suddenly in the road we saw many trees with many flowers, flowers with wonderful colors. I didn't think on the consequences. I just run to the road. On the floor there were many flowers also and, I couldn't see one of those flowers, so I put my foot on it and I fell down. I felt on the floor in a very slowly and silly way. My friends started to laugh and until today they joke with me about it, and they always said to me: "TAKE CARE WITH FLOWERS".


Sensory details.


Summer is a season where weather change. The temperature increases and it is a season where the sun hit more intense it is stronger than ever before. The temperature is so high sometimes you want to stay all the day in a swimming pool, take a shower or do something to feel fresh. Summer for women is wearing dresses, shorts or skirts, you can wear it different types of shoes, and many accessories with fresh colors like rings, earrings and necklaces. For men is a little different cause they don't wear accessories like women but they can wear shorts with sandals and a t-shirt, and they can be fresh and have a cool style, in some cases they can wear flour color it is the last in fashion and it is a cool style for men and women.

Giving examples.


 My favorite season is summer. I like this month because is a month very relaxing. You don't have to get up early. You don't have to go to classes, to high school or to university. The best part is have all the time for you and for your folks. You don't have worries about time or about the next day because you don't have to give an exam, work or go to study. You don't have the same responsibilities like study or develop homework. You can get up late, watch TV until 4 or 5 am at morning, go to parties, go out with friends, eat a lot but just for pleasure and not because you have anxiety or because you are worry about the high school or for approve a subject. You can go to the beach, to the swimming pool, go for a walk in the park and do many things without worries.

REFLECTION: This draft in part was easy and difficult. For one part was easy in the draft of giving examples or in the text telling an incident because when you have to tell the things that you like it or try to say something that happened for me it's more easy. I made some mistakes in punctuation, but my ideas were good and clear. On the other side it was difficult for me develop the draft sensory details, because I didn't knew it how to start but then I did a rainstorms and it made me more easy to develop.